Thursday, November 19, 2020
Tuesday, November 17, 2020
Story Beats
Five Events Before the scene
1.Goodman goes to the woods
2. good man meets a strange man
3. goodman sees a woman from town and the old man knows her
4. there is going to be a party
5. Goodman hears his wife, finds her ribbon
The scene I wish to recreate:
Goodman going to the part, with the ribbon in hand, and the old man staff, going to the party
After
1. Goodman gets to part, sees all the town folks
2. goodman sees there is a ceremony
3. a new person will be revealed to join
4. It's his wife!
5. He wakes up, not sure if it was real or a dream.
To connect: wooded forest path toward a dense clearing, with firelight (party) in the distance
Old winding forest path
Walking stick (Connects to the old man)
Ribbon (Connects to wife)
Signs of a ritual ahead
Future: Ritual, Dreamlike state hazy fog like in the distance, symbolistic carvings on trees
The ribbon should have an indication of wife other than color (it's pink) perhaps a Ms. Goodman
Stick is in the form of a strange serpent (Indicating a ritual of the devil)